10 Questions with Romance Author Elaine Levine (@ElaineLevine)
This Author Spotlight features Elaine Levine, author of The Edge of Courage.
1. How did you get into writing?
I was a big reader when I was a kid. I discovered romance
fiction in my teens and decided, when I was in college, that I wanted to write
it. There’s something cathartic about happy endings, good trumping evil, and
hot, smexy sex.
2. What do you like best (or least) about writing?
The answer to both questions is “writing.” Seriously. I
don’t like writing, but I love being a writer. The story I see in my head is
invariably eloquent, emotive, and lyrical, but something happens when the words
hit the paper. They crystallize into ineffective, bland, and chunky prose. I
have to constantly carve away at them until I create something that’s close to
what I imagined. It’s work. I don’t like my first drafts. If anyone were to
read them, they’d think a first grader wrote them. But somewhere, in my final
drafts, I begin to hear the echoes of my story vision. And that I love. That is
what I want to give to readers.
3. What is your writing process? IE do you outline? Do you
stick to a daily word or page count, write 7 days a week, etc?
I’ve written seven books now. Five of them have been
published—four by a
traditional publisher, one I self-published. I have yet to write a book the
same way twice.
I’ve tried plotting, outlining, writing synopses, using note
cards, and standing on my head. Nothing makes the process any easier. My
stories, even though I write romances, are very hero-centric. Most are told
significantly from the hero’s point of view. I can’t draft the story until I
fall in love with my hero. Once that happens, I can hear him. I know what his
hopes and dreams are, what he yearns for, what he fears. And then, I start
listening for the woman who is his other half. She’s always the opposite of
what he thinks he wants. She always makes him reevaluate who he is and what his
life is about. I love that personal transformation. It never gets old to me.
So many authors suggest the only way to write a book is just
to write the darn thing. They commit to one or four hours a day writing. Or x-number
of days a week. Or 2500 words. Whatever. I’ve tried that, and it just doesn’t
work. I can sit in front of the computer for hours. If I don’t have the words,
nothing gets put on paper. If I try to force myself to just freaking
concentrate and produce something, I can probably write a sentence an hour.
It’s excruciating.
I’ve learned that I have to have thinking time—without the expectation of
producing words on pages. Lots and lots of thinking time. I need to daydream. I
need to ponder. I need to wonder about stuff. That fills me with words. I run
to my computer and vomit them onto the screen, then go off to daydream again. I
get so forgetful and distracted while I’m in the conception phase of a story.
When my thinking is good, when the story will be strong, I find I’ve shed
myself and stepped into the skin of my characters, wearing their souls, feeling
their fears, being them.
I know. I’m crazy. Thank God for my husband who cleans the
house and does the grocery shopping and cooks our meals. It’s sometimes hard
for me to get started writing a book because of that weird process I have. I
warn my husband that I’m going under when I begin a new story. He always says,
“No worries. I got your back.”
4. Who are some other writers you read and admire, regardless
of whether they are commercially “successful?”
5. Should the question mark in the above question be inside
or outside the quotes?
No idea. That’s what editors are for.
6. What’s your stance on the Oxford Comma?
We should talk about this. I can tell from your last two
questions that you are concerned (or curious) about keeping to the rules in
fiction. I am an advocate for good grammar, punctuation, etc.--as long as it
doesn’t get in the way of a story. The interesting truth is that rules don’t
make a good story. While a good story can be poorly punctuated, with plenty of
structural and grammatical errors, and still be a phenomenal hit with its
readers, nothing can fix a bad story. A bad story is not improved by proper use
of English. And conversely, the improper use of English will not kill a good
story.
Here’s why—when
readers are into a story, they cease being aware of the act of reading. They
enter another dimension that is a cross between listening to the story and
experiencing it. Their eyes move so rapidly over the page that they aren’t even
seeing every word. That is the magic of reading. They don’t care if a comma is
there or not, or if a sentence ends with a preposition, or if any of the
standard rules of grammar and punctuation are being followed.
Yes, Elaine, we should talk about this.
You are correct: when I read, I do indeed enter that other dimension in which I am experiencing the story as I am reading.
As my eyes move over the page, they do not see every word . . . unless a word is missing, misspelled, or there is a punctuation error. I seem to have a knack for noticing such things.
For me, and this is just me, I absolutely 1 million percent DO care if a comma is missing. (Prepositions are another matter, as sometimes ending a sentence with one is a deliberate stylistic choice. I sometimes do such things in my own writing. But everything I do is deliberate.) However, if said comma is missing or there is an outright screw-up, it stops me dead in my tracks and yanks me out of that ethereal dimension, the thetic erupts, my disbelief is no longer suspended.
As a practical example, last year I discovered Tanya Huff's Valor series. They are phenomenal, exciting Sci-Fi military adventure novels starring a bad-ass Gunnery Sergeant named Torin Kerr. The problem is that the books were LOADED with grammatical problems. The errors grew more numerous as the novel progressed, and each book was worse than the one before it. Whomever was tasked with doing the proofreading was asleep at the wheel. I found it mind-boggling that such wonderful stories published by a major publisher (DAW) could be so blatantly amateurish. Because that is what typos scream when I encounter them: AMATEUR.
As writers, this is what we do; proper grammar/punctuation is important. In last week's Author Spotlight, fantasy writer P.B. Dillon offered a practical, unforgettable example; PB wrote:
The best example I’ve found of its importance [it being the Oxford Comma] is the sentence, “We invited the strippers, Oprah, and Hillary Clinton”. Without it, Oprah and Hillary Clinton become the strippers. With it, they were invited along with the strippers. Without the Oxford comma, it’s impossible to distinguish what is meant.
It's stuff like this which makes me a stickler for grammar and punctuation.
Unless you're defying convention for a reason, but that is a debate for another time.
Okay, Elaine, back to you!
7. What is your book, THE EDGE OF COURAGE, about and how did
it come to fruition?
I had some readers challenge me to write a contemporary
western. Consumers of genre fiction have expectations about how a story in any
given genre or sub-genre will unfold. The story ideas I had for a contemporary
western kept sounding too saccharin to me. I knew I wanted to write the book as
part of a series, so it would need to have a significant story arc that would
not be resolved for several books. I wanted, in this first book, to tackle the
issue of PTSD and what our warriors returning from Iraq and Afghanistan might
be facing. Since I tend to write a little dark, I decided that I need to step
into an entirely new sub-genre of romance for me—romantic
suspense. It was exciting and different. I love the historical western romances
that I write, and I do have plans for many more, but it was fun to diversify a
bit.
THE EDGE OF COURAGE is the first in a planned nine-book
series called the Red Team. It’s based on the premise of nine special
operations warriors who’ve left the military and have joined a private firm
providing security and intelligence to the U.S. government. In the first three
stories, they discover an enemy they made while serving in Afghanistan has
followed them home to the U.S.
8. What’s your current writing project?
I’m currently working on the second book in the Red Team
series, SHATTERED VALOR. I had hoped to have it out by the end of August, but
I’m definitely moving closer to late September now (remember all that thinking
time I said needed?). I’m hoping to get three books a year published in the
series, which is a lot easier now that I’m self-pubbing them.
9. What book(s) are you currently reading?
None. I can’t read while I’m writing a story. I wish I
could. I just never enjoy a story while I’m creating my own. I never finish any
of them.
10. Who or what inspires your writing?
The happily-ever-after ending that my stories give readers is
what makes me want to write. Life is scary. It’s hard. It’s rarely as rewarding
as we’d like it to be. A romance is like a vacation for the brain and the soul.
You know whatever bad things the characters are dealing with in the story will
be resolved to their benefit. It feels as if you’ve tackled a hurdle and won.
It feels good.
Finally, is there anything you’d care to add? Please also
include where people can read your published stories, buy your book, etc.
Thanks so much for inviting me to visit your blog, Ryan! My
books are available at Amazon and B&N. You can learn more about my books at
my website, www.elainelevine.com. I have a Facebook page, but I hate the darn
thing. I can’t ever figure out how it works. I do Tweet a lot, so I’d love it
if you followed me on Twitter @ElaineLevine.
You're welcome, Elaine. Please let us know when subsequent installments of your series become available.
Be sure to visit Elaine's website and buy a copy of one of her books today!
Thanks so much for all you did to get this post up today, Ryan! I wasn't the easiest (or most organized) guest you've ever had!
ReplyDeleteAnd I absolutely agree with you about using proper grammar and following the rules in fiction...for me personally. But I don't read as a reader does. I cannot turn off my internal analyst. When I get into a story I'm reading, I always am looking at why a certain passage does or doesn’t work for me. What techniques did the author use to achieve that coolness? Are they something I can add to my bag of tricks... Reading like a reader is one of the things I miss since I became an author.
You're welcome, Elaine. It was a lot of fun. An interesting debate. Try not to let your understanding and study of the magician's tricks ruin the enjoyment of the show!
ReplyDeleteI've alrady read The Edge of Courage and loved it. SO ready for the second book! epub
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it, Jenifer! I'm hard at work on. I can't tell if you left your email (Ryan might be able to). When I get it, I'll send you the ePub version.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting!
Oops- that last post was incomplete! I meant...hard at work on Ty's story!
ReplyDeleteI loved The Edge of Courage and have been waiting (im)patiently for the next book. So glad to hear it might be later this month.
ReplyDeleteI would love an epub copy.
Judi
Boomer21(at)rogers(dot)com
Hi Judi! Thanks for stopping by! Hope you'll enjoy Ty's story, too. I'm shooting for end of Sept...ish.
ReplyDeleteI'll get The Edge of Courage sent right out!
Sounds like just the kind of thing I've been looking for. I'd love an epub copy. cwrydbom(at)knology(dot)net
ReplyDeleteAlso, I can see both points of view with grammar. If the story is really moving along, it's easier to overlook errors, but sometimes, that sort of thing will pull you right out of the story.
Thanks! Cheryl
Hi Cheryl! Just sent the ePub file to you. Thanks for stopping by!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comments, everyone.
ReplyDeleteJenifer, we need your email address.
Cheryl, you're absolutely right: a great story with a few errors is fine, but eventually they begin to pull down the entire story. Thanks again!
hi Elaine! thanks for sharing your thoughts about writing, grammar and your book. i enjoyed the grammar part a lot. thanks as well for being gracious!
ReplyDeleteaobibliophile(at)gmail(dot)com & i prefer epub
hi Ryan!
great interview and discussion. thanks!
Hi AO! Thanks for stopping by! Ryan and I did have a great chat about grammar and the rules of writing. He certainly made me think about what I do and why.
ReplyDeleteI just sent you the .ePub file. Hope you enjoy Rocco and Mandy's story!
Kindle format please. Loving reading from my kindle.
ReplyDeletegaileee at yahoo dot com
Just sent it your way, Gaileee! Hope you enjoy it! And I'm with you--I LOVE reading on my Kindle. Makes it so easy and comfortable to read whenever and wherever I want!
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